Talk:Fan Fiction Reviews

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Vitani's Dare
I found the story fascinating and highly believable, despite the author's opinion. The portrayal of Zera as more concerned about her children than revenge is actually very good. The basis of Kiara spending time with Kovu and his sister is great idea, and it would explain why Vitani was so quick to side with Kiara at the end of TLKSP. The dream where Kiara sees the past is positively genius, it advances her personality and deepens her understanding of the others in addition to being just plain cool. I will admit that I got some of the inspiration for Jini from Banbe, but I'd better stop now before I start spoiling my own story. --IceLemur 02:01, 5 June 2008 (UTC)